That is beautifully crafted Ellie. The environment, the situation, the unrequited need for love, the energy between them, the sensuous storm is building on the horizon and it's going to shake the house to its foundations when it hits.
I can tell that you've felt this building sentence by sentence, the pacing is spot on, you're immersed in this work.
You're very talented and a keen observer of the human condition. The characterisation is perfect
This is such a thoughtful comment 🥺 thank you. It genuinely means a lot that you noticed the pacing and emotional tension building because I really wanted it to feel slow, intimate, and quietly consuming.
That was a pretty good story. I live the imagery and sort of silent movement to the characters you put into it. As i.was reading it, i was imagining all the things going on. You did a great job with the details.
Ellie- I was totally transported to this world you created. Every sentence was perfectly crafted, every emotion felt in my body. For that brief period, I felt like I was Isla. It was intoxicating in all the right ways. Thank you for sharing this 💕
This means so much to me 🥺 “For that brief period, I felt like I was Isla” is one of the loveliest things a writer could hear. Thank you for stepping into her world with me 🤍
That is beautifully crafted Ellie. The environment, the situation, the unrequited need for love, the energy between them, the sensuous storm is building on the horizon and it's going to shake the house to its foundations when it hits.
I can tell that you've felt this building sentence by sentence, the pacing is spot on, you're immersed in this work.
You're very talented and a keen observer of the human condition. The characterisation is perfect
This is such a thoughtful comment 🥺 thank you. It genuinely means a lot that you noticed the pacing and emotional tension building because I really wanted it to feel slow, intimate, and quietly consuming.
And you've achieved that beautifully
It's aroused me!
That was a pretty good story. I live the imagery and sort of silent movement to the characters you put into it. As i.was reading it, i was imagining all the things going on. You did a great job with the details.
That means a lot to me 🤍 I really wanted the atmosphere and details to feel immersive, so I’m glad they came through.
Ellie- I was totally transported to this world you created. Every sentence was perfectly crafted, every emotion felt in my body. For that brief period, I felt like I was Isla. It was intoxicating in all the right ways. Thank you for sharing this 💕
This means so much to me 🥺 “For that brief period, I felt like I was Isla” is one of the loveliest things a writer could hear. Thank you for stepping into her world with me 🤍