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Graham's avatar

That is beautifully crafted Ellie. The environment, the situation, the unrequited need for love, the energy between them, the sensuous storm is building on the horizon and it's going to shake the house to its foundations when it hits.

I can tell that you've felt this building sentence by sentence, the pacing is spot on, you're immersed in this work.

You're very talented and a keen observer of the human condition. The characterisation is perfect

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That was a pretty good story. I live the imagery and sort of silent movement to the characters you put into it. As i.was reading it, i was imagining all the things going on. You did a great job with the details.

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